Link to my review for “Singularity Alice”. Second story I reviewed for Syntax and Salt. Not my favorite – not by a long shot. I was bored, mostly. The ending was interesting though.
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Today’s review will be of Christina Dalcher’s “Disprosopus.”
This short story from Syntax and Salt was a bit more to my liking than The Alabaster Man was, but not by much. It was interesting, I will give it that, and the writing wasn’t bad. I kinda expected what I think was supposed to be the “twist” (I imagine it helped that I looked up the meaning of the title first) and I have to give all kinds of credit to the father in the story for coming up with the creative revenge of his daughter’s death, but I have so many questions that need to be answered.
Naflah says her job is to distract the sheikh while Aneesa does her work, and it is implied that Aneesa bites off…um…*cough* something. But how does a man not notice that? Even with a good distraction, they’re gonna feel it. Unless she had poison in her teeth, and all she had to do was get a good nip in, but that isn’t what is implied at all. Also, how does she hold him down so he doesn’t struggle against the bite? I mean, again, there is only so much distraction can do.
If you can suspend your belief past those little problems, however, it’s not a bad little story. I might be willing to give the author another look, at least.